第61章
普风,写危险x高的手段有点……怕对读者不好。写窒息对我很简单,郑昱的人设是喜欢控制,夏景行的人设是喜欢被控制,这点跟窒息吻合,心理很容易把握写起来没难度(而且bl里好像没人写过,还挺有新意),一直到首章发上来之前我还在考虑把最顶头关于不会有窒息的话删掉,在番外里写,但最终还是没有这么做,在番外改用了其他手段(要命的是跟24/7又有一点重)。宁可重了24/7也不写窒息就是觉得它不安全,我不希望宣扬不安全的x行为。所以t教手段如果被觉得跟24/7类似,我也真没办法了,毕竟现在这样的成品有很多原因。
karlyn跟ee类似?可能吧,可karlyn真的戏份不多统共就j句话。那暴君又跟谁类似呢?rraarlyn那点台词全塞给暴君也不是不可以的,但这样故事里的角se们x别太不平衡,总共就老太太和nv秘书是nv的(秘书的戏份很少),连小宋都疑似双,实在太世界大同,我不喜欢。我还曾经想过给karlyn弄个nv奴,后来想想各种不好,还是作罢。
所以,配角也好t教也罢,真的不是有意借鉴24/7,只有契约是特意引用的。十多万字都写了不差那j百字,何苦还非要弄个跟主角不是很配的契约y塞进去,害我改前改后。累不累。
顺便放上原文:
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&nbshe rees to obey and sbit o his aster ays there are no bondaries of i, or which the sve ay willflly refse to obey the dire his aster
&nbshe rees that, oered to the svery tract, his body belongs to his aster, to be sed as seen fit
3 all oe sve&039;s possessionise belong to his aces, and aterial goods, to do with as he sees fit
&nbshe rees to pse his aster to the beility, that he now ep; -
karlyn跟ee类似?可能吧,可karlyn真的戏份不多统共就j句话。那暴君又跟谁类似呢?rraarlyn那点台词全塞给暴君也不是不可以的,但这样故事里的角se们x别太不平衡,总共就老太太和nv秘书是nv的(秘书的戏份很少),连小宋都疑似双,实在太世界大同,我不喜欢。我还曾经想过给karlyn弄个nv奴,后来想想各种不好,还是作罢。
所以,配角也好t教也罢,真的不是有意借鉴24/7,只有契约是特意引用的。十多万字都写了不差那j百字,何苦还非要弄个跟主角不是很配的契约y塞进去,害我改前改后。累不累。
顺便放上原文:
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&nbshe rees to obey and sbit o his aster ays there are no bondaries of i, or which the sve ay willflly refse to obey the dire his aster
&nbshe rees that, oered to the svery tract, his body belongs to his aster, to be sed as seen fit
3 all oe sve&039;s possessionise belong to his aces, and aterial goods, to do with as he sees fit
&nbshe rees to pse his aster to the beility, that he now ep; -